We get quite a few pitches from startups here at The Next Web. While some are quite good, there are a good number that are plain awful.
People often ask us as to just how we like to be pitched via email. This is how.
For this excercise let’s assume that you are a smaller company doing something that you think is innovative in technology, and are looking for coverage around some sort of new release, major milestone, or partnership.
The Pre-Pitch Warmup
The first step actually occurs before you pitch me, you need to say hello.
- Send me a short email introducing yourself, introducing your product, and close the email stating that you are not expecting a reply. This shows me that you are just looking to make first contact. I will file you away in my head so that when you actually are looking for coverage, I know who you are.
- If possible, give me a beta code to your service and invite me to play around with it if you are still behind closed doors. All humans love exclusivity, and we bloggers are no different.
Your Pitch
You have completed step one, let’s get to the meat of your email.
- In the subject line of your email alert me of your name, and your company. If I get an email with the subject “Jim from AwesomeTech2.0.com” and I know who Jim is (from your first email), it is almost a guaranteed chance that I will open your email. That’s it, you are already in my head and have my full attention.
- Call me by my first name. Calling me Sir or Ma’am makes the pitch overly formal, and I might suspect that I am part of a mass emailing which I personally hate. Never, ever call me “TheNextWeb author,” I’ll just delete the email.
- Tell me why I should be covering you. This is not the point where you introduce your piece of news and product, instead tell me something like this “I read you coverage of startup XXX, and I think that we are doing something in a similar space that you might want to take a look at.” Now I know that you actually know who the hell I am (flattery always works), and that this is something that I might actually have interest in covering. All tech bloggers have certain genres that they love to write about. If you tell me that your product is in one of my favorite niches then I am more likely to cover you already. Save me the time of guessing just what you do.
Now you have my attention, I feel comfortable because I know your name, and you have flattered me, it is time to fling your pitch.
- Give me a short company overview, explaining what industry you are attacking, what your secret sauce is, and who your competitors are. Then drop your news tidbit that you feel needs coverage. You are not the only person in my inbox, so 300 words is about my limit. More than that I and begin to fear the email, possibly starring it for later reading (the inbox deadpool). There are too many other emails in my inbox to give you all my time, so keep it terse.
Set Yourself Apart
What makes some pitches better than others?
- If you have a video demonstration of your product, put that up front. We all love videos. We can put them in posts to help explain your company, and they help us get a quick handle on what you are trying to accomplish. They are good for everyone.
- Give me the tl;dr at the end. A quick executive summary of the main points. When I am covering you, I will probably copy paste this into my post for reference while I write.
- Say thanks for my time (or something snappy if you can think of it), and drop an email and phone number that I can use to reach you.
- Not at all required, but a short joke never hurts at the end, we all love to chuckle some.
Ways To Make Your Email Pop
- Email me yourself. I pay four times the attention to a startup employee emailing me than a hired PR person. PR people are annoying, and do not have a founders flame for the product.
- You have two goals in your email pitch: show me passion, and get me excited. If you are excited about something, and I get interested in it, why would I not cover it?
- Never fear sending a second email with a note that you want to make sure that we caught your first note. Often I mean to go back and reread an email and just don’t remember to. Nothing personal. If after two emails I say nothing, then you are probably not doing something that I find too interesting. That’s just fine, there are many fish in the sea of tech blogging, and you are only looking to reel in a handful of the top.
And of course, pitch me at alex@thenextweb.com.















Great post Alex!
Great post Alex!
Great post Alex!
Great post Alex!
Bookmarked.
Thanks mate.
Aw, you make me blush.
Thanks for sharing your tips. Brilliantly and succinctly put.
Thanks man, a pleasure to share.
Thanks man, a pleasure to share.
Great post Alex. What confuses me, however, is how (pro) bloggers believe they are some how different from traditional media. What you have outlined is how all traditional PR is done. What concerns me is the perception that contacting a blogger is some how special, when in fact it is not. Entire “Social Media” workshops are about “How to Contact a Blogger”. Please, you are not telling anyone anything new….Be polite, let someone know what you are doing with your company and kindly please do not spam. You are not anymore special or important then traditional media. PR is done poorly regardless of blogger or NY Post reporter.
Hi NextWebAuthor #4,
one thing to include on your list are links to images, videos, etc – make it easy to find media – but never ever put the media in the email as attachments. i hate when i get an email with a 10mb logo eps.
I like to see a quick blurb at the top – something that draws me in without using loads of catchphrases. This is something that PR people miss everytime – they jump right into the big press release without giving me anything to bite into.
Here's one of my pitch posts from 2 yrs ago:
http://www.centernetworks.com/title-not-important
good post alex
Fair points, but it goes both ways, right? People don't pitch us the way they would pitch the NYT. So yeah, we are not gods on pedestals in any way, but many people forget the basics, hence this post.
Fair point Allen, it can be good to have the short overview first, I am torn as where I prefer it. I guess that comes down to personal pref.
Also yeah, INCLUDE A HI RES LOGO, forgot that one. :)
one additional note that i've really noticed a lot lately – especially with all the local NYC startups that ask me to meet – many of them haven't even looked at the CN homepage before meeting to see what I have written about – it shows a lack of interest – and another question to ponder – should the startup pitching be following you on the social nets? probably not an issue for TNW since ya'all are on the default list – but I find many that don't follow me.
bonus note – the pr firms that pitch me and don't even look to see if i have covered the company previously.
Hey Alex…I really appreciate you writing this post. I'm the co-founder of a boot strapped startup and I'm always looking for better ways to approach people and be considerate at the same time.
From my own experience, I think it's good to participate in the bloggers website as well. Of course not everyone has a chance to spend a month before their launch to go and contribute on all the blogs out there, but I think it should just be something that everyone does on a regular basis. If you're in this industry, you should be reading and communicating with others in it. Not only will it make your name more familiar within certain communities, but you'll learn a hell of a lot more by doing it. Just like Stock Brokers read the Wall Street Journal everyday and then discuss the articles with each other, people in the tech, internet, blog, etc. industry should be reading things on their own sectors and discussing it too.
Thanks again for writing this article…I'll definitely be sharing it with some of my other entrepreneurial friends.
-Ken
Wow Allen, that example pitch in the above link is absurd…boderline disrespectful.
I think people need to realize that if they want a personal and unique review of their site then they should equally create a personal and unique pitch.
Thanks for sharing that blog post above.
Agreed Alex…Blogging may be in the same industry as a NYT but it's definitely not the same thing as a newspaper. There's different etiquettes and procedures. If you want to appeal to a certain type of business, you probably should know how that business works.
All good points.
Great post Alex! I am in the middle of writing a pitch for “techbloggers”, I found your tips very usefull :) thanks!
Great post! If anyone ever wants advice on how to pitch me, I'll guide them here!
Alex — in my time in PR (yes, I'm one of THOSE annoying people), Your ideas work with traditional media as well. I teach media relations to non-PR people. Critical to forming relationships with media is mutual respect — for their time (not to waste it) and being polite (no hard sell). GReat post!
Insightful! Thanks Alex for writing a post like this. I've been pondering for a while now how to best approach you and other social web bloggers to pitch our new startup.
For those of us who are starting up social networks, getting blog coverage is often the first step of our go-to-market strategy. We need to get some user traction on our site before we can implement other strategies.
For first time entrepreneurs, or those who are new to this space, it can be intimidating to contact bloggers. Then you add the stress of not getting coverage and screwing up our go-to market strategy and – whoa it's crazy. Your post helps a lot, thanks again!
you will get one pitch following step by step your “recipe” :)) anyway, crystal clear your article
Thanks very much for sharing this, as a student I find it's always useful to discover such posts outlining seemingly simple practices in detail.
Great posts :) lots of insights.. the main take is build relationships first, then together with the writer find the best angle :)
Thanks for sharing Alex.